a)
I learned that people can have fixed, or mixed
feelings about certain subjects. Some may have really strong feelings about a
subject to where you can tell that their tone of voice changes when they are
stating their opinion about something.
b)
I found my peer to be very helpful and specific
in reviewing my paper. He let me know exactly what I should work on and
complimented me on what sections I did really good on. For instance, he told me
that I really need to work on my introduction and thesis, because I focused too
much on explaining what the difference between persuading and manipulating. He
also let me know that my introduction didn’t really state a clear thesis. He
told me that I need to put just as much effort into my part A than I did to my
part B.
c)
I agree
completely with everything that my peer told me after reviewing his comments. I
reread my paper and I did notice that my intro was not very good, and that I did
put a lot more effort into my part B than I did my part A. I will most
definitely use his comments to help me in revising my paper. He helped me see
the many mistakes that I did not see before.
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